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Post by littleb on May 8, 2009 9:55:29 GMT -5
For anyone interested, I've stuck the first part of a new fic up at my lj: cj2017.livejournal.com/3251.html#cutid1It's finished but pretty long so it's gone into 6 parts. Mainly Sarah & Derek playing out and getting into a lot of trouble. PG-13: bad language, violence (no more so than on the show), broken bones... Feedback more than welcome, here or at the lj. |
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Post by orangepaperz on May 9, 2009 2:53:37 GMT -5
Woo hoo! and it's a multi-parter this time too! (please don't make us wait long) Your stories are full of descriptive awesomeness. One thing (out of the many) that I like: "He did his best, trying to break a trail for Sarah without leaving the flattened undergrowth equivalent of a neon sign screaming: we went this way!" - I chuckled at that. SO looking forward to more  |
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Post by littleb on May 9, 2009 8:12:51 GMT -5
Woo hoo! and it's a multi-parter this time too! (please don't make us wait long) SO looking forward to more Heh, thanks for that. The next part will probably be up before you read this... I like a nice cliffhanger as much as the next gal, but I'm not completely cruel  |
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Post by orangepaperz on May 11, 2009 2:28:42 GMT -5
Just read part 2 and 3! Poor poor Sarah! Your attention to detail is amazing. I was squirming in my seat when I was reading some of those sections.
Looking forward to part 4:)
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Post by schmacky on May 11, 2009 2:58:53 GMT -5
Yay! So glad you decided to write another piece. Awesomeness. I'm loving it so far and can't wait for more updates. I just want to say you're truly sick, ya know that?  You just LOVE to hurt Sarah lol But you really do capture her determination and attempt to control the pain and not show it very very well. |
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Post by littleb on May 11, 2009 14:04:16 GMT -5
Just read part 2 and 3! Poor poor Sarah! Your attention to detail is amazing. I was squirming in my seat when I was reading some of those sections. Looking forward to part 4:) Cheers chuck. Sorry for the squirming! I'm just about to post 4/6 up... it's a slightly more sedate, take a breather kind of installment Yay! So glad you decided to write another piece. Awesomeness. I'm loving it so far and can't wait for more updates. Heh. I was going to give you a head's up. And then totally forgot. <hangs head> Sorry. L.O.L. I consider it completely within canon to be mean to Sarah. Hell, if the show writers can shoot her, have her chew her way out of a pair of handcuffs and throttle her every six seconds, then I figure what's a little broken arm between friends?! ETA, Cat just said "well, if you don't have hurt, how can you have comfort?!" She's totally got a point... |
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Post by orangepaperz on May 14, 2009 0:43:58 GMT -5
Just read the last part! Thanks for the lovely multi-parter fic. I've really enjoyed it -it gave me my tscc fix. Your background knowledge makes the story so much more grounded and like canon.
So . . . any sequel planned for the future? (I'm so needy)
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Post by schmacky on May 14, 2009 1:11:21 GMT -5
I loved all of it! Great fic.. makes me miss Derek so much *sniffles* Even though there is a Derek still alive in the future.. we'll never get back that Derek. And it reminds me how much potential Derek and Sarah's relationship had and how it all got wasted *wipes tears* thank god for fanfic.
Excellent job!
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Post by littleb on May 14, 2009 2:38:56 GMT -5
Just read the last part! Thanks for the lovely multi-parter fic. I've really enjoyed it -it gave me my tscc fix. Your background knowledge makes the story so much more grounded and like canon. Ahh, very glad you enjoyed it! <LOL> Never say never, but if I don't finish another story I've had on the go for years (not fan fic) Cat will probably damage me in ways unmentionable on a G-rated forum! I'm thinking NAGD will not be my last foray into TSCC fic though... I loved all of it! Great fic.. makes me miss Derek so much *sniffles* Even though there is a Derek still alive in the future.. we'll never get back that Derek. And it reminds me how much potential Derek and Sarah's relationship had and how it all got wasted *wipes tears* thank god for fanfic. Excellent job! Cheers hon. I miss Derek too. I guess - not having killed him and having taken them all off on a tangent - that he can stick around in anything else I might write! But yeah, they certainly missed a trick with him and Sarah in the show. |
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You just LOVE to hurt Sarah lol But you really do capture her determination and attempt to control the pain and not show it very very well.